I use a program called Pro Writing Aid to help me edit my work. I’ve found it very useful and they regularly add new features. One of the newer ones is something called critique which uses AI to review passages of between 500 to 4000 words.

I have been running it on different chapters of various books to see what happens. The results have been interesting. Even though the language of the critiques is very similar, each one has enough insight to lead you to believe that the AI is actually reading the book. However, as each result only takes 15 seconds to generate I doubt that much thinking is happening behind the scenes.

My best guess is that the AI is nothing more than grammar rules being run over a document. The results are feed into a per-prepared form and sent back to me as AI analysis. Still, it looks impressive and the program is still in beta.

Does it look real? I’ll let you decide. You can read the critique of my chapter from The Night We Met, Satisfaction, below.

5 responses to “In bed with AI”

  1. You should become an affiliate… it has definitely made your writing (which was always very good) even better, clear, descriptive and easy to read. Yes, they have an affiliate program – faq -> affiliate program

  2. If that only took 15 seconds, it’s a pretty good overview, with some decent ideas for improvement. 👍

  3. Thanks for the feedback. I’m not satisfied with TNWM so I am rewriting it in 3rd person. I’m also fleshing out some of the subplots so that the end isn’t quite so abrupt. Only three books in and I think I’ve cracked the code.

  4. hmm… the AI report is so-so I guess. feels like I was reading a personality test report. haha! :p The areas for improvement section might be useful, esp if the author is wondering how else to improve his/her writing. Interesting.

  5. I must confess, it was a bit of a mind-bender to try and figure out who the first person was at times. Third person might definitely help with that. Looking forward to the reworked model.

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